Haiku Journey

Short, long, summary of a life

White Heron

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Lone white heron loping
over winter’s blackcold water
on tai chi wings

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Author: taohobo

A wondering wanderer who's traveled the world, found the love of his life, sleeps little, insatiably curious, living life...

4 thoughts on “White Heron

  1. Perfect, just love ‘tai chi wings’!

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  2. “Tai chi wings”, how very apt, I’d have never thought of it myself but it’s such a good description.

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    • Laura, sorry to be so long replying to your comment. Had a, “Duh?” moment just now when I realized that not everything in the spam filter is spam. That was one of those haiku where it just wouldn’t “sound” right, then suddenly there it was. Thanks very much for the encouragement.

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      • No worries at all, I’m often rather slow to reply even to the comments that don’t fall into the spam-zone! It’s great when that happens, I often have to walk away from something when it just won’t work, but then I usually find the answer was staring me in the face as soon as I revisit it again.

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